SUMMARY
In an article published March, 2003 in The Chronicle titled "What Limits Should Campus Networks Place on Pornography?" author and former president of the University of Wisconsin system and the university of Virginia, Robert O'Neil claimed that there was a current moral struggle going on at California Polytechnic State University.
That Moral struggle is over computer content and how if at all it should be limited. O'Neil begins by telling us a story of a college professor at Cal Poly, who was about to give a power point lecture and instead found sexually obscene images. This ignited a debate and moved some faculty member to address the Academic Senate in efforts to change the current policy. Those who are in favor argue that sexual and hate content especially unwanted are disturbing and offensive, that they demean female students and faculty, and they believe it promotes a hostile work environment.
They would also highlight that the University has a high standard of integrity to uphold, also the schools resources are wasted and the content presents an increased virus risk for the network and they even linked obscene Internet access to increased sexual assaults on campus. However, those opposing go straight to the First Amendment, that it is a student and faculty right to be able to view whatever material they wish and pointing out that it would be very difficult to enforce restrictions. O'Neil chimes in to put his two cents in and proposes a compromise of going back to policy and regulated some but not all content. He concludes by giving us a metaphor to help us see that we need to balance and not go to extremes.RESPONSE
In evaluating O'Neil argument i think it is well written. I thought it was effective to get our attention with the absurd story, i would not want that to happen to me. He presents his information and evidence clearly, they way i like it. After the introduction O'Neil goes right into the meat he explain the what the resolution would propose( a strict ban on pornography) and goes into detail the views of those who are in favor and who are opposing. He throws in some other important things that relate, his oppinion and propose solution, and concludes, basically i like his organization. How ever, i did not like his bi-partisan approach, it seemed insincere and lifeless.
Does he understand what we are talking about here. PORNOGRAPHY,
maybe others don't feel as strong.
But I am outraged that students and faculty would be allowed to view for example,child pornography and get away with it by a simple appeal to the First Amendment. WHAT?! I do recognized that in a university there are reasons, such as ligament research that would permit such content to be viewed and analyzed for strictly educational purposes and the proposed resolution would allow that to go through by special permission from the University president.Any other reason beside strictly academic, approved by the right authority on the campus, is not for the environment of learning and should be done in the privacy of you own home. I agree that the authority to regulate topics should be broaden but to who I'm not sure. To think my instructor could be viewing pornography for gratification twenty minutes before class makes me sick.

What is the world coming too, isn't this a no brainier, come on we are talking about porn. It's simple, if you want to view obscene things do it at home, school is for school. They should definitly lay the law down!



Agreed!!!
ReplyDeleteWhoa, this shouldn't be a hot topic article but it is! Wow, you represented your side very well too, good job! Not only does your blog page look professional, but your layout for this specific article is pretty amazing. This is better looking than Huffingtonpost.
ReplyDeleteAs for what you said in the article you nailed it. "What is the world coming too, isn't this a no brainier, come on we are talking about porn." I mean if that doesn't sum it up, I don't know what else could.
I do like how you have Summary, and then the Response. Of the essays I've read and commented on so far, you're the only one who's done it this way. (most people mixed them up in the articles together)It does make the response kinda better. I got the feeling of "I can't wait to see what you have to say next."
My suggestion isn't in content or how it flows. Its just I noticed a few spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, missing punctuation and maybe spacing mistakes. (president.Any) (definitly) (i) (University of Wisconsin system and the university of Virginia, Robert O'Neil claimed)
A simple Spell Check and Grammar Check this would've been perfect!
Again, well written. Thanks for letting me read it!
Robert thanks for the feed back it is very helpful!!!
DeleteI agree with the first amendment and the people who argue for their first amendment rights, in most cases. However, in this particular case I am appalled at their lack of understanding for it and their demeaning of it by arguing for the right to look at porn at school. The school is private property owned by an individual, individuals, or maybe a public or private entity. In any case its private property and what you can do on private property is mostly up to the owners. If someone at the school really thinks that their going to be heard out on the subject of defending porn at school, their mental capacity is somewhat questionable and I would most likely be asking what they were doing at college in the first place.
ReplyDeleteI feel that topics such as this one are meaningful but only to a certain extent. Mostly because of the ridiculous argument made by the moral lacking defenders.
I thought your article to be well composed it was clear as to where I was in my reading as I was reading. Though, you should try to make it clear in the summary if the original author had a stance or opinion on the matter. I would help me to understand an overall purpose of the matter as seen by the author. I don't thing I caught that in your summary or response.
Great response, you seem to be very passionate about the subject and it shows. At the same time you were open minded enough to say that it should be allowed in research study, and I suppose I agree with that in a sense. Pornography should not be allowed on public networks such as school because it is a well know fact that, at the very least you risk infecting the public system with a virus. My only constructive feedback would be to proof read once more because I caught a couple simple typo's. Other than that it was well written and easy to read.
ReplyDeleteI really like this topic of pornography. However it is a very sensitive topic. First, I want to know how they linked obscene Internet access to increased sexual assaults on campus. I find it really intresting.
ReplyDeleteSeccond of all isn't the first amendment- "The amendment prohibits the making of any law respecting an establishment of religion, impeding the free exercise of religion, abridging the freedom of speech, infringing on the freedom of the press, interfering with the right to peaceably assemble or prohibiting the petitioning for a governmental redress of grievances."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/First_Amendment_to_the_United_States_Constitution
I dont see "right to have porn at school," in there anywhere. Wikipedia dosent know everything I guess:-)
I admire your stance and passion on this topic. I agree totally people should not be watching it at school or in public. I feel it is for private use only. However not all COLLEGE STUDENTS ARE MATURE ADULTS LIKE ALL OF US and they think practical jokes and joking about sensitive topics out in the open is really funny. I dont agree that the sites should be restricted. I do feel something should be done though.
Thank-you for you response to this article your argument really gets your point across, and other than a few grahmatical errors is very well written.
You
Liz,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your article.
The sad part is because the colleges are educational institutions, they can not put filter up, because filters would block necessary learning material. Sad but true.
It shows that this is something that means a lot to you, and that you are very passionate about.
Good Job :)
Liz,
ReplyDeleteYou are one intelligent woman! I agree with you whole hearted-ly that it's PORNOGRAPHY that we are talking about here people!!! But, when reading this I couldn't help but think of BYU and their rules, like no shorts, no flip flops, modest at all times, and that players can not be sexually active, or at least not public about it. They have no issues with not having students come to their school. At every institution there is a code of conduct, if you don't like it then don't attend.
Now to your writing, like I said earlier, you are a very smart person who definitely has her own opinions, but what makes you intelligent is recognizing others opinions, and being open minded. There are some grammatical errors, as pointed previously and you need to remember to caps your "I". All in all a great job done.
Thank you for having passion in your writing!
I think you did a very good job with a hard subject. It isn't difficult to realize the problem faced with it but where to set restrictions and who would decide if the restricions were too extreme? You did an excellent job in expressing your opinion on this topic.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you on keeping it totally separate from school but as adults we should be mature enough and realize this shouldn't have become an issue. I think you your opinion you possibly could've considered opposing views and put in a counterbit that would've strengthened your own. Other than that it was very good. Thanks for sharing.
I find it just ridiculous on how people just jump on the "First Amendment excuse". There is a code of conduct for every school and watching pornograhphic material at a SCHOOL, just dumb. I thought you did very well on your article. I could tell that you put a lot of emotion into this and that can be very powerful. Good job!
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